This week and last week we have been writing a story about Unseen Deeps. This is my story so far.

 

Paragraph 1

As I was gliding through the deep, I saw a sand city, it had sand buildings, sand clothes and even sand drinks.  I moved on and saw a garden, it had coral growing vegetables, popcorn and even fish.  They buried the fish eggs and when they were ready the fish dug up to the surface. Then I saw a ship so I swam over quickly, it looked really new but there were some pieces that broke off.  Then I saw a yellow glimmering light in the distance…

Paragraph 2

 

 As I looked at the yellow light, I thought I should look at it later so I kept swimming and as I saw a creature that looked like a whale then it got mad so it puffed up like a puffer fish and it had even had poisonous spicks. 

That is my story so far.

What would you write for your first paragraph?