This week I have been writing my next part for the story unseen deeps. This is my story so far.

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As I was gliding through the deep, I saw a sand city, it had sand buildings, sand clothes and even sand drinks.  I moved on and saw a garden, it had coral growing vegetables, popcorn and even fish. They buried the fish eggs and when they were ready the fish dug up to the surface. Then I saw a ship so I swam over quickly, it looked really new but there were some pieces that broke off.  Then I saw a yellow glimmering light in the distance…

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 As I looked at the yellow light, I thought I should look at it later so I kept swimming and is saw a creature that looked like a whale then it got mad so it puffed up like a puffer fish and it had even had poisonous spicks.Next I saw a creature that looked like a horse but also had a horn and lights all around it, and it was a fish. There was one more creature that I saw, it was a donkey instead of legs it had tentacles. Whoever touched the  donkey’s legs or arms for a hand shake would be very annoyed. 

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I went back to the ship, and I saw the glimmering yellow light that looked like a key and as I got closer I saw what it was, it was a key so I grabbed it. As I kept swimming I found a chest and it was like there would be some treasurer in it. As I put the key in the chest…

This is my hole story so far hope you like it.

Do you like the ocean?