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Quick Write – Week Eight

This week we did our quick write. We wrote about elephants breaking out of the zoo. This is what I would do if the elephants were loose at the zoo, and this is my story.

You work at the zoo and the elephants have broken loose! What will you do?

I was working at the zoo one day and I checked on the monkeys and turtles, then I was walking to check on  the elephants but I heard something stomping and then I saw the elephants were escaping so I ran to them but they saw me so I grabbed a rope and made it ring a bell to make other employes to come and help. Then after about one minute they appeared out of nowhere but we cornered the elephants and we walked them back to there stable and we saw a mouse in the stable, that must of been why they escaped to get away from the mouse.  The end

If you had to write about the elephants breaking out, what is your plan to catch them?

Elephants Abound on a Southern Summer Safari

Quick Write

Today we have been doing a quick write. We had to write about climbing a tall tree.

You climb to the top of the tallest tree in your neighbourhood. What can you see that you couldn’t see from down below? And hear is my writing.

I climbed to the top of the tree and I saw ……  five blocks away there was a man looking for his pants. 3 blocks away there was a dog on someone’s swing, ten blocks away there was an donkey eating people’s clothes off there washing line. Six blocks away there were people playing with pigs in a pen getting all muddy, thirty miles away there was an rocket blasting off. At the Hokitika bridge there was a man jumping off head first off. There was a person having a drink at the play ground but the water splashed his face and he was soaking wet, and that’s was I saw from my tree.

The end.

Do you think I would see all of them things?